a whisper and a little brush of the wind, right by my neck
the sway of the leaves and the howling of the night wolves
buried under huge layers of heavy flannels,
even though we know it’s all just a dream
I saw that flicker of that bright burning candle,
a bit of hope in a bleak universe
so since I now know how beautiful life can be
I might just capture that candle and keep it as my own
because as the crow flies high above the skies
I wait patiently for another candle to shine
a child who’s running, running fast and a girl who’s flying, flying far
what do these two have in common? nothing other than hope
hope, the faith that brings me hope at night.
when all seemed lost and they only saw a muted gray in their eyes,
grounded to the earth and pulled a bit down below
this girl and this child found their way up to the skies
and saw starlight.
when they turned away and soared back to reality,
the stars shone a bit brighter and wrapped their spindly arms around them in a hug
and the two gently snuggled back with the stars and the skies,
back at home.
What does it mean, when someone says see you but never came back?
When they promised to talk to you once more and broke it like brittle lollies
taking your heart with it, snapped in two neat pieces.
All the sweet silvery lies slipping off their tongue
and all the words they coated with honey and you believed.
You stay strong, they told you. Strong as steel.
But you collapse and can’t go any longer
if only they came back.
Have a wonderful day! Ily all β€
Love these x
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Thank you! x
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oh my gosh, aditi, these were absolutely beautiful (the last one was my personal fav.) you should share more of these π but now I want to eat a lollipop…
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hey thank you so much! ππ I will π every month (whoops forgot about may)! haha, you should have eaten the root beer one I gave you but noooo you didn’t! π jk jk, no hard feelings… πππ
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Beautiful! I think I liked the last one the best π I can’t wait till next months poems!!
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Thank you very much!! π it seems to be the public favorite π
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These are so good!
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Thank you so much!! Xxx
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These are actually so amazing!??! That last one just cracked my heart. I am so in love with these! aduiudenwjxgqwiux w!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can’t wait to read more like these!!!
-Emma π
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Thank youuuu!!!! π π you’re too sweet!
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Aww – these were so beautiful! (BUT Iβm honestly so far behind posts so Iβm trying to binge read everyoneβs all at once π³)
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Iβve also just read that everyone liked the last one best but I think the first was my favourite? ππ
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Hey, same! That was my fav too π surprisingly!
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Weβre just psychically connected! π
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Haha yeah! π
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Tysm!! π haha, story of my life π
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Hey Aditi π
These were just so beautiful and touching, and so relateable lately! x Especially the last one, that was so beautiful. Over the past couple of weeks, I’ve someone who promised to well e there and they weren’t but instead of crumbling I became stronger π
Has anyone ever told you your like amazing at poems…?!
Amber xx
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Hey Ambs! π
Omg thank youu and I’m glad it was underatandable and you could find solace in it!! Wow thanks!! π Oh my, I’m so sorry Amber… that’s happened to me wayy too many times. Just know that I’m always here to talk, okay? Xxx πππ
Um tyyyyy and you just made my day for the billionth time!!!
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Hey Adi π
Aww, no worries! π They were so good π Definitely, it kinda made me at peace with me soul (I sound so hippie but you know what I mean π) x Aw, no worries! π It’s okay, it was well it was tough. Thanks! Well, you know that feeling when you don’t know what you have until it’s gone? There was kind of just this void that well, wasn’t filled for a long time π But I’m back on my feet, and stronger. Thanks so much x It helps to get it out which is nice π
Aww I’m so happy about that! I think my new catchphrase for my blog should be “making sweet popcorns days’!” Aha, I’m actually probably going to re-brand (like in a year or so, and I’ll definitely be becoming a popcorn blog ;P)!
Amber xx
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Hey-
thanksss!!! You are the literal sweetest omg π I can’t evennnn! Haha, hippie Amber *runs away before Amber bursts over* π
I know- oh gosh, I definitely know that feeling. It’s like that emptiness that you didn’t find until something was gone. I’m so glad you’re back on your feet and strong π It always helps to write or talk about it with someone else.
Hah yesss! Or ‘making sweet popcorns out of sours!’ Oooh nice!! I’ll be waiting! π
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How beautiful these all are.
You are very good at capturing particular emotions by transforming them into scenes — I love the first one for its lovely, simple descriptiveness, and just the imagery overall is great. Candles, the universe, nature, the beauty of life and hope and comforting flannels — what’s not to love? lol. Really nice job on that one.
The last is (to me) the most emotionally charged; sad and relatable for everyone at some point, with a strong choice of words.
“All the sweet silvery lies…”
Thank you for stopping by my blog & Twitter page! I’m so glad you decided to comment so that I could find you — I am super excited to follow you! Keep up the great writing, Adi. You’re already good, and you’ll only get better with time.
Best wishes to you!
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Oh gosh, thank you so. much, Eve Estelle!! You made my day π sooo much brighter!
Thank you! That was my favorite to write as well- it just gave a wholesome feeling in my bones *aka cheesy overload* Anyways thankkk youuu!!! β€
Yeah, it was written with raw emotions in mind and I can feel that everyone relates to it. Your praise is really helpful and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Aw no problem! I loved your blog (especially your poetry!!) and I'm glad we can become friends β€ Thank you! This means so much to me!
Best wishes to you as well!
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i can relate to the last one so hard ππ you’re such a great poet! can’t wait for more π
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Sadly I think we all can π omg thank you soo much!! π ah you made my day!!!
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you’re welcome! βΊπ
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It is great.
Best wishes
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful poems…how amazingπ€©ππ«
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thank you so much!! β€
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